Wednesday, October 1, 2014

octpowrimo - Day 1 - yearning

yearning to
be caught up
and in char(n)ge

the changes are in my mind
but act out

yearning for a chance
one more time

one more time

will this be it?

Born anew - this time?

Yearning.


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4 comments:

  1. The charge/change play was fun. You could even do more of that through the poem and I think it would be cool.

    I think there's always a desire for change, rebirth, the chance to...start over.

    Very nice.

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  2. Hi Emily! Nice to see you at OctPoWriMo. I really like the idea of having two interchangeable words with different meanings. Versatility. Nice idea!

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  3. Oh... Emily. I feel your words. I could've written them. I know yearning intimately.

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  4. Your poem speaks to me on many levels Emily, thank you so much for sharing with us at OctPoWriMo!

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